Wordy phrases are like junk food – they add only fat, no muscle. “Do not use several words when one will do.”

              Wordy: I am of the opinion that the aforementioned managers should be advised that they will be evaluated with regard to the utilization of responsive organizational software for the purpose of devising a responsive network of customers.

              Concise: We should tell the managers that we will evaluate their use of flexible computerized databases to develop a customers’ network.